نمونه رایتینگ تسک 2 - با نمره 7 ( سمپل شماره 2) - discussion

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Being trained in a specific country and initiating your career there is considered crucial for essential professions like doctors or engineers by some. However, others argue that individuals should have the freedom to choose where they start working, irrespective of their home country or the country where they received their training. In my perspective, undergoing education in a particular country implies an obligation to contribute to that country, at least for a certain period

 

On one hand, training individuals to become engineers, doctors, or nurses is not only a costly process but also a time-consuming task for any government. Therefore, it is crucial for those trained to remain in the country to offset the benefits they have received. For instance, in my country, aspiring doctors undergo an 8-year study period during which they receive financial support as part of their salary. Conversely, if students opt for different fields such as teaching, they do not receive any salary until they begin working

 

On the other hand, imposing restrictions on professionals and compelling them to stay in their home country may lead to dissatisfaction and act as a deterrent for students aspiring to become doctors or engineers in the future. If trained individuals are not allowed to work in other places of their choosing, it could turn the country into a restrictive environment, discouraging potential professionals and resulting in a shortage of doctors and engineers. Take my country as an example; as a result of setting strict laws for PHD graduates who wish to immigrate; when students finish their master course; they seek to study for further education elsewhere; where they will start working too which causes brain drain as well

 

In conclusion, I believe that the government should establish regulations requiring individuals who become doctors or engineers to work in the country where they were trained for a specific period. Subsequently, they should be free to choose their work location. This approach ensures a continuous supply of professionals, as new doctors and engineers replace their predecessors

 

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